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((The photo is NOT Mine, its a preview picture I thought just went with the words, please do not comment on the photo, its the Words that are mine to display here))Joeie.




DANCING IN THE RAIN..
BY:Joeie

Walkin, whispering in the rain,
You are all I know in my heart, how I want to dance with You...
In the rain
Touching fingers gliding across your sweet skin, rain pouring down,
Letting us give out our hearts to one another, you are all that I dream of..
Dancing in the rain, touching kissing, wind blowing, thunder pounding... rushing blood flows in us
Is this the storm or our heartbeats..
Dancing in the rain, touching, and kissing, wind blowing..Thunder pounding, lights flashing, dancing with You in the rain..
can you feel my hands on you, can you know of the power that flows from you to me.. you control me
can you understand the pleasure you have over me..rain, pours down.. dancing with you in the rain
give me more and more...

Can you feel, my heart, as I feel yours, rising and falling, pounding an exciting beat, how do you do this to me... How does the storm in you make my wind blow, make my hurricane form..
Baby, I love... your rain.....dancing in the rain with you.. never ending loving you, show me how to dance in the rain, slowly finding my leg rising and falling down yours, your hands rubbing so softly, saving me, pulling my heart closer, finding me...
Take me in, and teach me to dance in the rain..
Dancing in the rain, touching kissing, when blowing, thunder pounding
is that the storm or our heartbeats..
Dancing in the rain, touching, and kissing, wind blowing..Thunder pounding, lights flashing, dancing with you in the rain..

Stay and dance in the rain with me... alone, in the woods, fingers touch, time slows, we find each others whispers, hushed by the wind.. rushing slowly, taking our love higher, dancing, twirling, twisting, bending, racing, breathing...breathless....
Dancing, twirling, faster, and faster...
Dripping with love....Dancing in the rain, touching kissing, when blowing, thunder pounding
is that the storm or our heartbeats..
Dancing in the rain, touching, and kissing, wind blowing..Thunder pounding, lights flashing, dancing with you in the rain..
Dancing in the rain, touching kissing, wind blowing, thunder pounding
is that the storm or our heartbeats..
Looking up, I feel the rain upon my face, I look at you, that is when I see the sun...
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Wow! Thats Georgeus=) I love it.. :heart: :+fav:
awe... thank you :D

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Veyr beautiful I like, the piece also makes me feel a little sad somehow though ti's beautifully romantic what your describing, but atm I feel anything romantic can set me off to tears... argh, well done. I want to be in the rain with somebody now.

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Beautiful!!!! *sniffles* I agree with H... It makes me want to cry more than anything... So, you like to write songs? Do you perform or anything?
My sister and I are scheming about doing something musically, but it's tricky since we live far apart now and she has the only keyboard. XD I want to write a fansong about Hagrid. ^_^
...Oh, oops. Rambled again.
This is gorgeous! I wish I knew the tune, now, so I could sing it. ^_^

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I write to a beat, not so much songs, I cant play piano or anything, you would more aless call me a lyriacist..however you spell that..

This was actually more of a dance beat..
but not salsa, but definately sexy and sensual
:D
Very erotic beat, almost african meets techno..beat..
course IM RAMBLIN now.. :D
I use to play a saxaphone so I can read music, and I can write words as you can see. If I sat down with someone who could write music on a piano.. Fabu.. I know we could crank out mega hits..
but I do have other songs if your interested in the I think four I have online Ill snag those links for ya..

Most are written about one man.
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thats about all Ive ever put online or really thought they were maybe worth a little somene else would want to read.

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Its a dream, its some place you can go with someone in your own thoughts, without feeling guilty, some man out there does love you, for who you are, and will one day find you, he will give to you all you need emotionally and with great force. Love isnt lost, its displaced, love isnt gone, it hides. When he finds you, he will show it to you, I just hope you are ready for it unlike me Im sure I was in a tree lost in thought the day I was to meet my true adoring heart, then he ran off and got married to some other woman.. leading a life of semi pleasure, but never truely knowing love..

we walk the world alone.. unable to touch... You gotta have better karma than me honey, hang in there, I believe in you..

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gods... wow thank you for this beautiful comment, it's just.. not doing well at the moment, but I'll pull myself together, I always do. I'm capable of withstanding a lot, just sometimes I feel bad, but that's just the digestion of it

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The cherry stones say I'm going to be a kangaroo when I grow up.
oh and Im writing a book too :)
Never know if Ill get published but hey Im enjoying doing it.

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blanket, good book, hot cocoa or hot apple cider, and bed get some physical rest, and smile, :) Life does get better and it does come around and think on this.. IM DRAWING HP ART FOR DH! see see your smiling.. :D

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haha yes I'm smiling, I've also been giving myself a dose of morbid humor so I'm feeling better

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